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"The Serrano Legacy," an entertaining SF sequence with strong female leads and a realistic space-military flavor, began with Hunting Party. Young lieutenant Esmay Suiza came to center stage in book 4: Rules of Engagement is book 5, continuing her story.
Suiza may be a fine leader and tactician, but she doesn't know how to handle falling for Ensign Barin Serrano, a man she outranks. Frictions in command training school worsen when well-born beauty Brun makes a play for Serrano: Suiza's explosion of temper blights her career. Then Brun falls into the hands of the series' most plausibly nasty villains to date, a murderous, Bible-thumping militia that controls several planets where women are kept down and--if they protest--are surgically deprived of their voices. Moon remarks:
... it would be not only useless but dishonest to pretend that the New Texas Godfearing Militia did not derive its nature from elements all too close to home, in Waco, Fort Davis, and even Oklahoma City.
The "Nutex" have also grabbed a nuclear arms cache for Oklahoma-style terrorist bombing in Familias space, home of the Fleet in which Suiza and Serrano are officers. Multiple story lines cover Suiza's wrestle with her public and private life, Brun's sufferings and determination, Serrano's ups and downs with unwritten rules of command, and eventually a risky rescue mission into a Nutex solar system. Things work out excitingly and as they should. This is enjoyable interstellar adventure that is more harrowing than previous episodes. The next and final volume is Change of Command. --David Langford, Amazon.co.uk
From Publishers Weekly
Headstrong Brun Meager, daughter of the immensely powerful Speaker of the Table of Ministries, idolizes the slightly older Lieutenant Esmay Suiza, who is taking command track classes with her at the Fleet training facility. Esmay is too busy with her double load of courses to have much time for the younger woman, so Brun turns to handsome Barin Serrano to spice up her hours. The trouble is, Barin and Esmay had just been falling in love with one another. Brun's interference causes a distraught and overburdened Esmay to utter several ill-considered comments?including that Brun "has the morality of a mare in heat," a statement that gets passed to the newswires, which are ever eager for gossip about the rich and famous Brun. So when Brun is kidnapped, surgically muted, raped and impregnated by member of the New Texas Godfearing Militia, Esmay is considered the catalyst of Brun's headlong flight into torment. Esmay must clear her name, help save Brun and decide what to do about Barin?or risk a life filled with disgrace and loneliness. This sequel to Moon's popular Once A Hero (1997) is military space opera awash in suds. Moon's manipulative tricks, moreover, especially regarding Brun's prideful stupidity and hideous comeuppance as a sex slave, will at times be obvious to savvy readers. Even so, intensely lively characters, inspired details (including a bar comprised of salvaged parts from destroyed ships) and smart pacing ensure that the novel will win, if not prizes, at least readers' interest. Copyright 1998 Reed Business Information, Inc.
From Library Journal
Despite her standing as a hero of the Regular Space Service, Lt. Esmay Suiza returns to school for additional command training, only to find that her reputation has garnered not only powerful friends but even more powerful enemies. When religious fanatics capture the reckless daughter of a powerful galactic leader, only Esmay has the skills to attempt a daring rescue despite a smear campaign designed to implicate her in the crime. Set against a background of galactic dynasties and rogue planets, the sequel to Once a Hero (LJ 3/15/97) continues the adventures of an engaging and resourceful protagonist.Copyright 1998 Reed Business Information, Inc.
From Kirkus Reviews
Science fiction about the far future's powerful military families, a sequel to Moon's Once a Hero (1997). As Lt. Esmay Suizashe of the seriously bad hair and knack for getting into hot waterjoins her officer training course, she's requested to nursemaid the talented but wayward civilian Brun Meager, daughter of Lord Thornbuckle, the Familias Regnant's head honcho. Brun wants to party, but Esmay's taking double classesand when the red-hot Brun starts flirting with Esmay's beloved, Barin Serrano, the emotionally inexperienced Esmay explodes and bawls Brun out. Unfortunately, the media record the scene and Esmay finds herself vilified, reprimanded, and shunted off to the unglamorous Search & Rescue branch of the Fleet. Worse, Thornbuckle blames Esmay for Brun's plight, and she breaks up with Barin after accusing him of sleeping with Brun (he didn't). In a huff, Brun decides to tour her family's holdings in space, but makes the mistake of detouring through the system where the New Texas Godfearing Militia has just seized a freighter carrying illicit arms. The Militia consists of fascist religious crazies who kidnap and enslave women and children. They grab Brun, then beat, rape, and impregnate her, and murder everybody else. Esmay, executive officer aboard an SAR investigating vessel, finds debris and grisly remains, but it's a long time before she can track the crazies to their home planet. Poor Brun, meanwhile, gives birth to twins (for whom she feels nothing) and escapes just as Fleet's rescue gets under way. Esmay, back in favor after some manipulating by senior members of the Serrano clan (she finally gets a good haircut, too), gets in on the actionand, of course, Barin still loves her. Great female characters, vigorous plotting, a solid military-family backdrop, but not enough action to keep everyone on board. -- Copyright ©1998, Kirkus Associates, LP. All rights reserved.